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如何让OLevel作文的句子丰富起来?

2020-05-15 14:54:51 651人已读 分享到

  OLevel写作考察了学生的词汇积累和语法学习,同时也对学生的句式积累有着很高的要求,想要写出好OLevel作文,我们必须让句子丰富起来,那么我们应该怎么做呢?下面就跟着小编一起来学习一下吧!

  下面我们继续学习英语中的高分句型分析:

  Over the last half centurythe pace of change in the life of human beings has increasedbeyond our wildest expectations. This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughsthat are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis. This means that change isnot always a personal option, butan inescapable fact of life, and we need toconstantlyadapt to keep pace with it.

  那么,我们来比较一下,修改之前和之后的句子到底发生了哪些变化?

  1、原句:Over the last half centurythe pace of change in the life of human beings has increasedbeyond our wildest expectations.

  修改句:The pace of change in the life of human beings has increased.

  原句中有表示时间的短语:over the last half century

  原句中有表示程度的短语:beyond our wildest expectations


r如何让OLevel作文的句子丰富起来?


  2、原句:This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughsthat are changing the wholeway we view theworldon an almost daily basis.

  修改句:This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs.

  原句中有scientific breakthroughs的修饰语:...that are changing the whole way we view the world

  原句中有表示程度的短语:on an almost daily basis

  3、原句:This means that change isnot always a personal option,butan inescapable fact of life, and we need toconstantlyadapt to keep pace with it.

  修改句:This means that change isan inescapable fact of life, and we need toadapt to keep pace with it.

  原句中有对照的表达:...not always a personal option

  原句中有表示程度的副词:constantly

  可以看出,修改句从原句中拿掉的成分都属于修饰语,这意味着什么呢?这意味着:为了增加语意密度,我们需要对赤裸裸的思想加以装饰,要么让思想更具体(what),要么揭示思想的程度(how),要么给它装上时间的纬度(when),要么给它指明发生的地点(why),或者说出发生的原因(why)等。把这些附加的信息以正确的方式加上去,语意密度就增加了。一篇雅思作文,写出3-5个这样的句子,就足以显示高分水平了!

  关于OLevel写作句子如何丰富就为大家分析到这里了,希望大家一定要重视起来,提高自己的考试分数,另外小编提醒大家要重视词汇和语法的学习,如果还想了解更多关于olevel考试难度、olevel考试大纲的内容,可以添加我们的客服微信kewo11。


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